The story about recruiter Maria
Once upon a time there was a girl named Maria. Masha has been working in recruiting for more than 3 years. She was an experienced and courageous recruiter and filled about 4-5 Middle / Senior vacancies in a month. Applicants and candidates loved Masha very much for her sincerity, honesty, responsibility and personal approach to everyone. And Masha, in turn, liked to communicate with people, help them, and, in her turn, learn something new every day. From the very first day on the job Masha knew how important it is to write the first letter or message on LinkedIn correctly, and to make an effective, personalized "first touch". In her understanding, “first touch = first impression”.
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